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Who better to have my heart
than the one who knows me best?
We both have had romances and flings
but you are better than all the rest.

This love was the forbidden fruit
but we bit into it like Adam & Eve.
But now we're like Eros & Psyche.
From us, Eden has been conceived.

Funny how when we were kids,
we avoided each other's kiss.
Now every touch from your lips
gives me moments of sweet bliss.

We've shared our minds and souls before
now we include the form.
Our trinities complete, together entwined
the burning fire within keeps us warm

I know we will have downs and spats.
We may split and have many falls.
But like magnets, we will come right back.
Our force will break many walls.

My best friend, my love
We are the Lover and the Beloved.
What we have is an eternal divine gift
blessed by Heaven above.
This was inspired by my story "The Lovers." Click here to see the gallery folder: [link] :gallery: :wave:

I have a soft spot for the love between long life and best friends. It's like 50% not likely to happen and 50% likely to happen.

Feedback and constructive criticsm welcomed.

The picture is not mine. I found it on Google Images. Credit goes to the respective owner.
An Ending and a BeginningHate left me. Love found me.

A Mortal's Love TriangleLoved by Life; betrothed to Death


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Everlasting90 Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hooray:!!!!

I will!
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LilMijou Feb 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful
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Everlasting90 Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you and thanks 4 the fave!
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LilMijou Feb 18, 2013  Student General Artist
you're welcome ^^
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Zeal-GJP Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully wrote
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Everlasting90 Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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RockNRollGal Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww~ This is a sweet and beautiful poem!~
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Everlasting90 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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RockNRollGal Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! ^^
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